Review of my cv by maddy
Lucy Wright C.V
Layout The layout was very neat and tidy. It was easy to read and it looked very impressive. Punctuation Your punctuation was pretty good it was just missing some capital letters in some of the headings, other than that is was very good. Sense There weren’t many sentences in your C.V but everything made sense. Quantity I think you had an excellent amount of writing and it was spaced out really well. It wasn’t too long which is good. Content Your C.V had a good amount of context, and was very informative Spelling There were a couple of spelling mistakes in the heading but fix that and it will be good Pasta reveiw Your pasta recipe was well structured and easy to follow you used good descriptive words and it was well written Popplet reveiw Your popplet layout was really good I liked how you had a mixture of pictures and videos.You had a good amount of information and lots of interesting facts This is my spreadsheet I recieved a 5/5 for the criteria https://docs.google.com/spreadsheet/ccc?key=0AtnMtHitL3t3dExMWFFSdnhFQWNWMWJxUVJJODNabVE#gid=0
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this is a reveiw of my yola by danielle
This is my letter to my chosen teacher asking her to reveiw my webpage Reveiw from okeroa i like your yola it was good but not as good as mine apart from points gigidigigigidy
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